Music Video first draft (Nathan Kearns) (2)

From looking at the first draft of the music video I can see that it has all come together very nicely. I didn't expect the shots I took to look so affective in our music video. The black and white really works because it replicates Hoziers original music video and we have took that idea from there.

I think some of the shots I took would have been pointless but they have been used very well like the tracking shot of the birds flying in the sky. Connor and Michael done most of the video and guided me on what to do for about 30 seconds of it because my iMovie skills were useless.

I really like how the video has been made into a story but I think if I had to fault anything it would be the way the actor goes from being beat up to singing normally. I would have personally ended the video with him being beat up and then the camera moving towards the skyline. I'm not blaming Connor and Michael because I haven't been able to let them know but I will mention it to them in the second draft.

Overall I am extremely happy with how the video turned out and the majority of the credit has to go to Connor and Michael for working even harder in my absence. I think some of the lip sync is out of sync but maybe we can fix it in the second draft. I think the best shots are from the Docks when the water is in the background.