Hi Nathan, thanks for adding some of the storyboard ideas...can you please add all sheets as I know there are at least five pages. • Can you comment on each page too please at the side. • Double check your intro text as it needs to be edited for spelling and grammar. • Make sure you all keep up to date with who is doing what too - so it is goo dto see your 'ideas for plan' sheet. Discuss this in more detail to help the viewer understand it please. I look forward to seeing the updated version. Mrs McD-H
Hi Nathan, thanks for adding some of the storyboard ideas...can you please add all sheets as I know there are at least five pages.
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• Double check your intro text as it needs to be edited for spelling and grammar.
• Make sure you all keep up to date with who is doing what too - so it is goo dto see your 'ideas for plan' sheet. Discuss this in more detail to help the viewer understand it please.
I look forward to seeing the updated version.
Mrs McD-H